Someone Else's Arms
This stormy night you are in someone else's arms.I am jealous only of the romance we missed.I've no fear of losing you to another's charms.With tenderness yet without passion you are kissed.It seems...
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sigh.. This is absolutely beautiful... I really enjoyed this.. Wonderful work.. ~Mystic~~"Bought a ticket for a runaway train, Like a madman laughing at the rain, A little out of touch, a little...
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So many of us can relate to this piece, David. It is sad to know that you love some one with everything in you and yet she/he belongs to some one else. Great writing,...I truly enjoyed reading...
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David, great and strong poem, but if this is really an experience you are going through, as difficult as it seems, it's better to open your arms and let the unloving one depart from your heart and...
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*hugs* David. Excellently written poem... full of true feelings and real emotions. Angel~There is a light that comes with the knowledge of accepting thoses things that can not be changed and with this...
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Thank you all for your kind words of support. This was something of an experiment with cascading rhymes that I wrote a couple of years ago.MrLeslie, if I read your response correctly I was...
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Powerful writing David, excellent work...............WRITE ON!!Rapid-Fire's Poetry Request Corner
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